Walking the fallen

omg, so bright *crais* But this looks so gorgeous! Dat lighting! lol blood. I'm just glad its not his blood! I'd actually be all the more concerned! Hahaha. I can't really say much about this picture other than, "This just looks downright awesome!" After taking a few glances, I just can tell whether or not there's a mistake or not! But sorry to say, I've taken one too many glances and I did find some mistakes. lol

It appears as if the subject is leaning a bit too much to the left (his right) and I can't tell if he's just tired in general or if he's still hungry. If he's tired from running off after eating his meal, (It seems like the logical reason) his legs should be spread apart and slightly bent to appear as if he's heavy and having difficulty holding himself up after dashing off.

The lines indicating that his feet are under snow appears too "perfect," as if the snow was as fine as sand. Snow is somewhat tough and bumpy, so next time, try drawing those lines as if there are bumps there. Don't forget to extend the lines beyond the width of the legs. It'll appear as if his feet have been shoved into the snow.

Also-- is the lighting on the top left in front or behind those branches? To me, it appears as if its in front of the lone branch. If you want to show that the lighting is behind the branch rather than in front, you can actually draw the branch over the light and darken the portion in front of the light.

Honestly, I can't see anything else wrong with the picture that's noticable. Like I said before, this looks gorgeous and this looks downright awesome!