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:bulletblue:FELT LIKE DRAWING MY CHARA...

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YUSH,IT'S FINALLY D O N E !!!! 6 FULL HOURS,WITH ALL THESE CLOUDS AND THIS TERRIBLE HEADACHE WERE QUITE PAINFUL...BUT STILL,I MADE IT ;u; THANKS FOR ALL THOSE TIPS DURING THE JOIN.ME,WITHOUT THEM THIS PIC WOULD HAVE BEEN WAY WORSE.PLAYED AROUND WITH COLOURS AND SHADING,AND KINDA MESSED UP WITH LUMINOSITY AGAIN XD SORRY EVERYONE,BUT I COULD NOT RESIST ~!

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SPECIAL THANKS TO :iconkonveekou: FOR SPENDING SO MUCH TIME ON THE JOIN ME,BY GIVING INSTRUCTIONS :3

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This is just insane, this left me speechless, and I'm still trying to catch my breath! Goodness, those clouds must've been a PAIN to draw out! lol I'm so impressed with this piece, that I can't help but want to pet it. All over. With no tomorrow.

I can't seem to find any mistakes other than the wing and the shading on the blue ribbon on the tail.

The wing appears to be a little higher and non-attached to the subject. Feathers should appear beneath the wing's wrist. Not only does it add flow, but it also adds something there so that it doesn't appear empty. In addition to this, the wing appears as if it's being pushed rather than appear flexible and flap-able.

For the ribbon, it's not that much critique other than how it should be shaded. Rather than shading straight up-down flat, round it out a bit so that it looks like the ribbon is being wrapped around the tail.

Everything else is looking good! Keep it up <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>