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I can't seem to find any mistakes other than the wing and the shading on the blue ribbon on the tail.
The wing appears to be a little higher and non-attached to the subject. Feathers should appear beneath the wing's wrist. Not only does it add flow, but it also adds something there so that it doesn't appear empty. In addition to this, the wing appears as if it's being pushed rather than appear flexible and flap-able.
For the ribbon, it's not that much critique other than how it should be shaded. Rather than shading straight up-down flat, round it out a bit so that it looks like the ribbon is being wrapped around the tail.
Everything else is looking good! Keep it up
Not much in the way of improvements I can physically see. I would say however for fur, it seems a almost as if it belongs on a more cartoonish drawing. I saw this as more realistic as if you were trying for realism, maybe I am wrong?
Over all this is a great work of art, the wing itself looks as if it actually is a part of it. That is a hard look especially because wolves don't normally have wings. Thanks so much for posting this, if I ever needed a commission I would ask you and refer others to you.
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