This complited point commision of the very talented
She asked mw to draw her epic character Hametsu.Well,sorry for making it kinda realistic,but I can't help it all x3 I hope it's ok... I drew this while I was listening to the song carry-on,by Avenged sevenfold (black ops 2 ).I don't know how a song for call of deuty inspared me to draw THIS,but yeah...
"Some people live in selfish desire some choose to shout when they speak out in the flames it grows demon fire seeking of those with a voice one for tomorrow"
Whatever,I hope you like it!
Do not use this artwork in any way,shape or form (except if you are the commisioner) without my written permission.
This is a really nice pic. ill start with tghe fur ^^ its very nicely detailed and coloured but it doesnt have enough texture on the out edges. the paw padding should have a scratchy look and should look squishy. the eyes are very nice but the lighting should be a bit more to the left and less round. the rump of the fox/wolf should be more round. the impact of this is very stunning. though the water should look more realistic. the water should have shading from the fox/wolf. sorry if i sound rude but i never criticed before. sorry...
Ahhh its the first time I do a critique to you so I'll be nice (X'DDD)
I really LOVE the background. Simple, yet to beautiful and you made it look so realistic! The colours are very soft, it makes it fade and that's what makes it feel like it is like you cropped a picture and you added it there ♥ The fading colour of the mountains and the sun set is so wonderfully done♥ (does the word wonderfulyy exist? lol). Moreover, the water is really well done, and the reflection is nice too!
The wolfie is really nicely done♥ Good job with the fur and nice shading. However, the way you made the shading confuses me a but because it is not drawn according to the light source. You should work a bit on it and bounce lighting too since you have water there c: It looks like lights from many sources fall on this wolf.
Also, I am confused with it's anatomy. It looks like the part untill it's belly, is actually positioned to look straight and it's head is looking at us, while it's front right leg makes it's body looks likes it's positioned to face the mountains, and it's back leg since you drew the water taller there makes the pose look even more strange. Maybe it is juts it;s right leg that makes the whole anatomy go wrong a bit. Also, it;s bodi it a bit small. Aaaah, anyway, I really like the whole picture ♥ keep it up ♥
I really LOVE the background. Simple, yet to beautiful and you made it look so realistic! The colours are very soft, it makes it fade and that's what makes it feel like it is like you cropped a picture and you added it there ♥ The fading colour of the mountains and the sun set is so wonderfully done♥ (does the word wonderfulyy exist? lol). Moreover, the water is really well done, and the reflection is nice too!
The wolfie is really nicely done♥ Good job with the fur and nice shading. However, the way you made the shading confuses me a but because it is not drawn according to the light source. You should work a bit on it and bounce lighting too since you have water there c: It looks like lights from many sources fall on this wolf.
Also, I am confused with it's anatomy. It looks like the part untill it's belly, is actually positioned to look straight and it's head is looking at us, while it's front right leg makes it's body looks likes it's positioned to face the mountains, and it's back leg since you drew the water taller there makes the pose look even more strange. Maybe it is juts it;s right leg that makes the whole anatomy go wrong a bit. Also, it;s bodi it a bit small.
Aaaah, anyway, I really like the whole picture ♥ keep it up ♥
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